Thoughts on Essay #1

After completing my rough draft for essay #1, I was not very happy with the piece as a whole, but I was glad to finally reach the four page minimum. I found it difficult to write because I had trouble deciding what to include. I know that my paper is not finalized yet, so I will use the feedback from my peers and teacher to reach a high-quality finished product. Through revisions, I will attempt to relate back to my picture description more often, design a more focused paper, make the text less boring, and work on a stronger ending. Hopefully on Friday, I will be turning in a much more enhanced version of my rough draft.


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