Essay #3

Last Friday, I submitted my rough draft for essay #3. I thought the finished product was my best essay in this class so far, but the comments made me think otherwise. My paper is good overall, but I do need to make some changes. I need to figure out a way to better organize and separate my last criterion without causing my paper to have too many criteria. I also need to limit my counterargument to only one statement because I wrote it before the instructions in class, and I included two arguments. My biggest struggle will be correcting these mistakes while still keeping my paper at least 5 pages long. I hope I can find the time to edit my paper and implement these changes, so I can receive the grade I desire.


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